I think you pulled off the haunting quality quite well. Good job :)
Nice and laid back
Maybe could have built up to some sort of climax, but otherwise I liked it overall. Smooth and relaxing.
Thanks for the feedback :) I tried adding a little fast C section but It didn't turn out as I would have liked it to.
I have spent the last 30 minutes or so perusing your submissions, and have been impressed with the depth and complexity of your compositions. I have been trying my hand at orchestral style music writing lately, and your work lets me know I've still got a ways to go! :D Thanks for your wonderful submissions.
Thanks for taking the time to review them. It really means a lot to see a comment on anything. :)
Good luck with your own work... My advice is to keep on practicing, and to not be afraid to try out new chord progressions or styles... Once you start on a theme, let the music take you. You don't want to know how many unfinished pieces I have lying around because I couldn't figure out what to do or how to approach the rest of the piece. :/
I enjoyed the piece overall. The different instrument parts blend very nicely. My only criticism would be the drums seem to be a bit..sharp? not sure that's the word I want. But they seemed to cut through and distract rather than compliment the music. Could just be my speakers :P Anyway good job! Hope to hear more from you.
Thanks for the advice... If I find time to do a remix or something, I'll work with the drums more. :)
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